He did what?

iron_man_3_new_poster (1)Iron Man: the ultimate mecha-man.

I don’t normally go and see a movie on opening night, but I decided that if I wanted to enjoy Iron Man 3 without spoilers I needed to do it quickly. Fair warning: this post spoils the hell out of it, so if you want to see it with the element of surprise, stop reading now. It’ll be here when you come back.

So, what to say about Iron Man 3? First, it is the best of the Iron Man movies. Period. That said, I’m not sure if they’re doing another one, and I almost hope they don’t. Why? The franchise has turned into a one-trick pony. Admittedly it’s a good trick, pulled off perfectly in the first and third films, and almost perfectly in the second. Here’s the thing: in every Iron Man movie, the enemy has been the military-industrial complex. In Iron Man 1, it was Stane with Tony Stark’s own company. In Iron Man 2 it was rival defense contractor Justin Hammer. In Iron Man 3 it is AIM (Advanced Idea Mechanics). The goal of each villain is the same, war-profiteering, and Tony kicks much butt by proving over and over that, while he’s out of the business himself he still makes the best weapons of them all.

(Let’s stop for a moment and unpack the logic of this: the Good Guys win by pursuing Peace Through Superior Civilian Firepower. In a moment of supreme irony, in the second movie Tony even has his own Charlton Heston moment; “You can have my armor when you pry it from my cold, dead, body!” That’s actually a Captain Rhodes line in IM3, but still pretty much what Tony told the United States Congress. It’s a libertarian’s dream.)

Back to the bad guys, though, I do not want to give the impression that I consider the movies to be sermons on the evils of militarism, or corporate greed, or some other sermony thing. The problem the Iron Man movies face is actually a result of the current zeitgeist (fancy German word meaning “spirit of the time”).

To put it simply, with the end of the Cold War, the US became–to use an ecological metaphor–the local apex predator. I emphasize apex here, not predator (although lots of America’s critics will buy that normative description). There is now no country, no ideology, no coalition, that poses or can realistically pose a true existential threat to this country. The existential threat posed by the former Soviet Union was both military and ideological, and my generation grew up under the threat of a cold war suddenly going very, very hot and then ending in mutually assured destruction. But democracy  has triumphed; with the collapse of the Soviet Union in the mid-90s, America attained near-total hegemonic power–and we are finally starting to realize that we really don’t want it and especially don’t want to continue paying in blood and treasure to keep it. Even so, we can easily cut our military by half or more and still swing more bang and boom than any rationally conceivable coalition of nations combined. Of course Things Change, but for now the US has no external enemies that play in the same war-making league.

So, swinging back to the IM franchise, who could they write in as believable bad guys? Iron Man isn’t Batman; he isn’t about fighting crime. He has always been about fighting enemies fielding Better Weapons Through Science, and I have no problem with that. But here’s the thing. With no other military powers rising to the level of Credible Threat, we must be Our Own Worst Enemy. No external threat rings true with our modern viewing audience. Even more, in our current Politically Correct environment we can’t single out an internal enemy driven by any Real World ideology. This is why every one of Tony’s enemies has been a 1-percenter motivated by greed, greed, and oh yeah greed (except for one crazy who was motivated by revenge–but that was because of thwarted greed).

Don’t believe me? Think of all the real-world reasons why bad guys blow up lots of people and/or real estate, and not one of them is the monetary bottom line. In Captain America the bad guy wanted to take over the world, presumably to make it what he thought would be a better/purer one, and this is much truer to the Real World than Tony’s villains have repeatedly been; communists wanted a utopia of economic equality and were willing to wade through oceans of blood to get it, radical Islamists want Sharia to rule supreme for the greater glory of God, rabid environmentalists who occasionally blow things up want to save the world, etc. You can hate their means, but you have to recognize the sincerity of their goals even if you think they’re bug-nuts insane. (Note that this does not imply that I think that decent and law abiding communists, Muslims, and environmentalists are bug-nuts insane. Well, communists are politically insane, but then so are libertarians.)

And that is the touchstone of a truly dynamic, truly believable Big Bad. People will lie, cheat, steal, and kill for greed, but to threaten civilization or even a small piece of it takes conviction. Which is why in Wearing the Cape, while a coalition of super-terrorists get together to try and assassinate POTUS in a truly scorched-earth attack, the supervillain who levels half of California and kills 50,000 innocents is motivated by a sincere desire to Save The World.

So unless the Hollywood screenwriters suddenly get a clue and pick someone besides the Greedy War-Profiteer for the next bad guy (and in Iron Man 3 it is a greedy war-profiteer heating up the War on Terror for fun and profit), I’m afraid that Iron Man 4 will be a riff on an overused theme. Not that the three movies haven’t played some great riffs. Stuff blew up gloriously, heroes behaved heroically, great lines were delivered, and Pepper Potts rocks.

I hope you enjoyed it as much as I did.

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A “Super” Series.

Quite some time ago I reviewed another superhero story I discovered while doing research into the genre. The book was Power Down and I reviewed it here. I am pleased to announce that Ben White has now published the fourth book in the Charlotte Powers series: Rising Power.Charlotte Powers 4As you can tell from the cover, things get hotter for Charlotte.

What I have enjoyed the most about the Charlotte Powers series is that, unlike many superhero stories, it doesn’t try and deconstruct the superhero genre. It is not a classical superhero story, in that it takes place in a “future” setting that doesn’t even have the nations and cities we know, but its superhumans are still very much superheroes or supervillains, complete with costumes, codenames, secret bases, minions, etc., and the fate of the world rests on the outcome of their struggles.

The Charlotte Powers series doesn’t sugar-coat the conflict either; it does not present a saccharine version of Good vs. Evil, and doesn’t flinch from racking up the body count that real hero-on-villain action would precipitate. People die. Good people die badly. It remains, however, an optimistic story, and Charlotte, for all her flaws, is an optimistic hero. The story is a YA story only in the sense that Wearing the Cape is a YA story–Charlotte is a young adult (younger than Hope), and with Book 4 now out I re-recommend the series to anyone looking for a great, even inspiring, read.

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Wearing the Cape Giveaway!

WtC, smallestOn Wednesday, April 10th, Wearing the Cape will be available for free download from Amazon.com. So if you enjoyed the book and would like to help promote it, post this on Facebook, tweet it, etc. I would love to give a thousand copies away!

On other news, I will be manning a table sponsored by Imagined Interprises Inc. (the publisher that will be printing new editions of my books next year) at the Amazing Las Vegas Comic Con in June. This will be the first comicon in Vegas, and I’m really looking forward to it.

Progress continues on Young Sentinels. I know, I know, it is late. All I can say in my defense is I want it to be at least as good as the first two WtC books, and Astra and company are going through a lot of changes. The current word-count goal is roughly 120,000 (I’m not sure I can get everything in with less). Hopefully fans will enjoy the direction the story takes with Astra’s world.

On a more personal note, I’d like to thank everyone who has not only enjoyed my stories but has taken the time here to share their enjoyment and their thoughts with me. Writing is by nature a lonely occupation, and it’s easy to feel like you’re in a bubble. It’s always heartening to hear from the world outside–another reason I decided to do tabling events like the Tucson Festival of Books and The Amazing Las Vegas Comic Con.

Thank You!

M.G.Harmon

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Two Days In Tucson

TucsonUnder different circumstances, I’d have thought I’d died and gone to heaven. Yes, heaven may bear a strong resemblance to a book festival.

I published Wearing the Cape in mid-2011, have seen it hit the top of its Amazon category, written a sequel and a side-story, sold thousands of copies, and never tried to physically market my books. Then I met an author from a small press who sells books the old fashioned way–over the counter or table–and he convinced me to see what I’d been missing.

So this weekend Maxwell Alexander Drake and I took a booth at the Tucson Festival of Books. For those who don’t know him, Drake writes the Genesis Oblivion epic fantasy series. It’s published by a small press, so although it is available through bookstores, you won’t find it on the shelves very often and he currently makes most of his sales across the table at conventions and book fairs. The irony is, this is a series that has won awards and is highly rated on Amazon; yet there are so many epic fantasy novels out there that it disappears into a sea of books. Wearing the Cape, standing out in a much smaller and less populated genre, blows it away in online sales.

So, the Tucson Festival Of Books was a chance for me to learn a new side of marketing by watching a master of his trade. Following are some notes from the weekend, in no particular order.

First Sale: Bite Me: Big Easy Nights, to a lady wearing a red hat (the least colorful part of her outfit) who asked “Do you have any vampire stories?”

Most Interesting Comment: “Thank you for giving her a costume that won’t fall off!” (Referring to Astra on her covers.)

Weather Report: It snowed north of Phoenix, and rained off and on all Saturday. In Tucson in March? Really?

Worst Thing About The Weekend: My feet–I stood for nine hours straight both days. Aargh.

Cool Stuff: We stopped and ate dinner with Mike Stackpole on the way down (he said he is writing a “sequel” to In Hero Years…I’m Dead.), and David Brin stopped by our booth to compliment Drake on his awesome covers.

Takeaway From It All: Cover art is king. Lots of festival-goers got sucked over to our booth by banner screens of Drake’s books (see Brin’s comment). I have had Amazon reviewers comment that they gave WtC a look because of its cool cover–thank you, Victoria!–and this is even truer at a book fair. Why? Because of this.

Tucson 1Multiply this table by 100 more booths. You are competing with a sea of trade paperbacks, and first they have to notice your book. Then they have to decide to trust your book enough to drop $15 on it. For this, cover art, back-cover blurb, and maybe even your first page, have got to be golden. They can’t say “I’m a book by a self-published author who couldn’t sell this to a publishing house, but trust me, I’m really very good. Really.”

So spend the money; small-press publishers even fall into this trap, but look at the cover of Farmers and Mercenaries.Farmers and Mercenaries

(“Nice kitty…”)

Now that’s a cover. Imagine this cover, and the cover of his third book (due out this summer), as big banner screens flanking the booth where thousands see it as they walk by. Yep, we got a lot of attention, and I’m going to get a banner screen done of WtC before my next event.

So, from the indie-writer’s perspective, was it worth it? Yes, for a number of reasons. For one, based on my sales, it looks like Drake’s publisher may also be picking me up. For another, this was my first book-signing experience, even if I was just signing the books as people bought them. I also sold enough trade paperbacks (quite a few as complete sets) to pay for the trip, something a lot of self-promoting writers fail to do. Will I do it again? Oh yeah. Coming soon to a convention near you.

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Share the Love!

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It’s that special day again, for both the lover and the love-lorn, and so close to Mardi Gras, too. Let the good times roll! More seriously, I’m in final preparations for the Tucson Festival of Books (March 8th-10th), and trying not to let it distract me from writing.

With all of the books I’ve ordered and neat stuff I’ve designed for this event, I’ve decided it’s time for another Review Drawing for the rest of February. The rules are:

1.) If you have not previously reviewed one (or all) of my books on Amazon, you may enter once per review–so if you review both Wearing the Cape and Villains Inc. that’s two entries.

2.) Once you have posted to Amazon, re-post the review here with your Amazon name so I know it was you. Also, feel free to post the reviewed books’ Amazon pages to Facebook. Share the love!

3.) At the end of the month I will draw two names, and the winners will get their choice of one of my books, suitably autographed for the occasion. The 2012-13 editions have been reprinted to remove some editing errors found after publication, and are in a new and easier to read (I think) font.

4.) All other drawing entrants will get one of my shiny new advertizing pieces. They’ll also be available at the book festival. Anyone what has already reviewed all my books… I love you guys–send me an address and I’ll send you one of these too.

Meanwhile I press onward. It has been definitively confirmed that Victoria Gavrilenko, the amazing artist for Wearing the Cape and Villains Inc., is back for a third cover. Young Sentinels will bring on many changes in Hope’s world, and I am hard at work to get it out to my patiently (or not) waiting readers.

-M.G.Harmon

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Young Sentinels, Peek and Update.

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Hello everyone, and sorry I’m posting so irregularly right now. Still working on Young Sentinels although I can’t give a firm release date. For one thing, YS will be the first book for which I will be paying for a professional edit! Try as I might, the previous books have all rolled out with embarrassing errors (since fixed), so…

I hope that everyone has enjoyed Omega Night! I may, in the future, release other short adventures, but Young Sentinels has priority for now, and after that there are a couple of projects I’m going to try and return to. But fear not! There will be more Wearing the Cape books; Astra’s adventures will be far from over.

Also, it looks like I will have my first “author’s table” event in March! It will be at the Tucson Festival of Books (March 8th-10th), and I will be sharing a table with Maxwell Alexander Drake, author of the Genesis of Oblivion Saga. So if you would like to get signed copies, you know where I’ll be.

So, what to say about Young Sentinels... As some have already guessed, it’s the story of the creation of the Sentinels’ “junior team.” Yes, the Sentinels are finally bowing to public opinion and the need to thicken their ranks and bringing on a team of superhero-cadets. It’ll be fun! To give everyone something to look forward to, here are the first two chapters (may change, no promises).

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Chapter One

The Big One in California changed everything, we had no idea how much. The Godzilla Plague was the first hint, but it’s all changing, picking up, moving faster than it did in the Teatime Anarchist’s outdated future-files. Stuff in his Big Book of Contingent Prophecy that waited five or ten years to jump up before is hitting us now, and stuff TA never saw in his time trips is coming out of nowhere—and by “coming out” I mean wrecking real estate and throwing bodies around the streets. Our fight for the future was a near run thing in TA’s unchanged timeline, when we still had Atlas. Now how can we possibly be ready?

From the journal of Hope Corrigan.

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We were just lucky I was flying morning patrol instead of sitting in class when Potowatomi Woods decided to destroy the Chicago Executive Airport.

“Shelly? Are you seeing this?” I asked.

Flying over the greenbelt that ran through the suburbs and communities of North Chicago, from my height the wave of green erupting out from tiny Potowatomi Lake looked like a surging carpet of leaves—which meant at ground level the edge of waving trees had to be moving faster than the panicked early-morning joggers using the forest park’s running trails could run. And they were running.

Jeepers creepers!” Shelly whistled in my ear. Now that she was Galatea she couldn’t tap our old neural link to see with my eyes anymore, but she remained my Dispatch wingman and had full access to the microcam they’d built into my mask. I’d have head-smacked her if she’d actually been with me, but her joke nailed the scene below perfectly.

“Get more eyes on it, Shell!” I called. “I’m going in!”

I dropped, counting on her to bring the rest of the team into the loop—even to light up the whole Crisis Aid and Intervention dispatch tree, we were so going to need the help. Watching morning joggers flee along the trails under trees suddenly whipping like they were being beaten by hurricane winds, I wondered if it would be enough.

There was no wind, and the trees were growing.

The spread is stopping at the Des Plaines River!” Shelly reported as I landed hard on the running path, leaping up to shatter an oak branch curling down to sweep a crowd of stumbling joggers.

“Stay on the trail! Cross the river!”

“Thanks!” one of the men gasped. He and a buddy pulled a hobbling fitness-granny into a two man shoulder carry as they all broke for the turn and the bridge. Popping up above the trees again, I could hear cries on surrounding trails. Crap crap crap crap crap! There was only one of me. My joggers hit the wider trail and I left them to drop back down and pull a middle-aged jogger out from under a tree root that looked like it had thrown itself over him. I lifted him into a fireman carry as the forest groaned around us.

“Any help would be nice, Shell!” I shrilled.

Speed-evac commencing, sheesh! Rush, Crash, Sprints, and Sifu are on it!” Further down the trail I saw another jogger disappear in a blur.

Lie Zi broke in. “Astra, I want you to get back upstairs, stay available for any extraction assistance our speedsters may require. Copy?

“Get high, assist evac where necessary, got it.” With Sprints from the South Side Guardians and Sifu helping our own, Dispatch had fielded all four of the city’s A Class speedsters.

Dropping my shaken but unhurt jogger across the river, I got back in the air—high enough that I could see the leading edge of the whipping green tide. Yeah, like I was going to stop any of that with my little maul. Ajax’s maul. What would he have said? Use a bigger hammer? There was no hammer big enough.

“Astraneedalittlehelphere!” Crash’s run-together call for help reached me through Dispatch, and Shelly obligingly threw a red bracketing box up on my new contact lens display. I dropped again, breaking through swirling tree limbs to find the narrow forest path beneath. Crash struggled to pull another twisted root off of a trapped morning hiker’s legs. Around us the path shrank and suddenly I was in the middle of a childhood flashback of Babes in Toyland and The Forest of No Return.

“Go!” I ripped the exposed root out of the ground with more force than I needed to—I’d lived in fear of the old, gnarly trees on our street for months after seeing that show. Crash pulled the hiker up into an assisting carry and disappeared in a red blur, and I launched up through the thickening canopy of branches. Back up in the open air I spun around slowly, trying to put a frame on what I was seeing.

The trees weren’t walking, they were growing; the expanding edge of the growth made it look like they were on the march. But the growth wasn’t in a neat circle—it had started at Potowatomi Lake and was moving south, expanding to fill the entire greenbelt between the Des Plaines River and the Tri-State Tollway as it went. Why—

The sharp crack of snapping roadway cut off my thought. The south edge had reached Dundee Road, the four lane road that ran through the wide greenbelt to connect Wheeling to Northbrook. Arching roots buckled the pavement while new saplings burst up and out, trapping morning commuters.

“Evacuating Dundee Road! Get here now!” Choking down rising panic, I dove again to snatch up a minivan full of screaming carpoolers and drop them gently on the other side of the river, flying back for more. How many could we get out before growing green started grinding people under?

Watchman and Variforce on station!” Lei Zi returned. “Continue vehicle evac!

Watchman dropped out of the sky above me, Variforce in tow. Watchman joined me in picking up and airlifting cars while Variforce configured his golden variable-form forcefields into whirling blades, decapitating climbing saplings before they could thicken and crush trapped cars.

“It’s worst on the edges!” Watchman shouted. Coming down he’d had a wider perspective, and he was right; as the edge swept south of Dundee, the frantic, twisting forest growth left behind slowed. He smashed a tree aside as it tried to anchor itself across a sporty convertible, extracting the terrified driver. I lifted a delivery truck up and out of the danger zone and returned for more, listening for more intervention calls.

Shelly-Galatea was back. “The next road south of Dundee is a ways down—Willow Road—but then there’s the Northbrook Hilton on the wrong side of the river, businesses south of that. The Northside Guardians are assisting evac there, we’ve got other teams moving up, and here we come to save the day!

The Sentinels floater came diving out of the morning sun, Galatea hitching a ride outside the canopy. Variforce swept a landing zone clear and as Lei Zi, The Harlequin, Riptide, and Seven piled out, Rush appeared in a red blur. “Dam Number One is still out from the spring flooding,” he reported to Lei Zi. “So Dam Woods Road is clear and there aren’t many civilians in the woods south of Dundee. We’re ahead of it, boss.”

Galatea settled next to me, leaning in as close as her shoulder-mounted missile racks would allow so she could whisper.

“Wow—so Babes in Toyland, isn’t it?”

I snorted before I could stop myself, turning it into a sneeze that wouldn’t have fooled any of my old teachers. Coach Gorski would have asked me to share the joke with the team—and then do laps.

Lei Zi considered the scene, expressionless as if she were looking at a traffic accident that needed unstacking, as if we weren’t standing in the middle of a walking forest. I tried to ignore the crunch of roots, the groaning wood, the crashing beat of branch against branch as they fought for room. And the weird smell—the sharp smell of churned earth and tree sap.

She nodded. “Okay then. We move south, follow the edge—but we leave no one inside the live zone. Watchman, finish clearing Dundee, then catch up. Astra, stay on backup with the speedsters. The rest, let’s follow the edge. Everyone?”

There were salutes, nods, got it boss’s, and other affirmatives, and we got to it. I flew through the creepy trees answering Dispatch calls, but like Rush said, there weren’t many left to pull out. I rescued an older couple—she’d gotten trapped between two new oaks and he wouldn’t leave her behind so I carried them both out—then an early morning birdwatcher who’d started snapping pictures instead of, oh, running for his life. He’d gotten knocked down and concussed by a fleeing white tailed deer smarter than he was.

Everyone got dropped at the designated evacuation stations across the river, and drone video showed the rate of expansion was slowing, short of Willow Road. Maybe—

The woods just jumped the river!” Shelly-Galatea sang out. “It’s headed for the Chicago Executive Airport!”

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And that was just wrong. Sure, Dundee hadn’t stopped it, barely slowed it down, but for a forest, even one growing fast as a wildfire, to take a right turn?

Sirens began wailing; an airport—a place where things happened at high speeds and lots of fuel lay around just waiting for bad stuff to happen—came equipped for disaster and able to let the whole wide field know to Head For Cover. The forest threw itself over the road and across the parking lot at the main terminal buildings in a cacophony of ruptured pavement and breaking glass. Explosively erupting trees thrust cars aside and smashed into the glass-sided buildings—and from the screams inside, not everybody had seen it coming soon enough to get out.

Despite being further away, Watchman and I hit the airport before anybody but the speedsters. Of us two, the stronger Atlas-type, Watchman simply battered trees down or uprooted them in the loose soil and torn paving while I swung my short-handled maul with both hands, shattering reaching trees as they tried to thicken and dig into the buildings.

“They’ll tear the terminal apart!”

He pulled another tree. “Rush’s team is on it! All we’ve got to do is slow it down!”

Thunder shook the air as Lei Zi arrived to make her contribution; lightning split trees from crown to roots, throwing chunks of tree and boiling sap with each strike. Riptide splashed down, going from flying spray to pissed-off man in an eye blink. Trees went down as he called water from the air, forcing the flow into pressure and velocity high enough to make a water-saw able to cut rock. Variforce arrived to slice away with his forcefield blades, edges only microns thick. Smoke-trails in the sky marked erupting craters as Galatea emptied her missile racks into the trees on both ends trying to flank our zone of destruction to get at the buildings to the north and south.

Mainbuildingemptied!” Rush reported over the general channel, voice ragged.

Lei Zi’s orders came sharp and fast. “Let it have the building! Speed-evac the neighbors! Everyone work the sides, let the forest have the field!” Good plan—beyond the terminal lay wide open space, acres of runway and parked private and small commercial planes for us to channel the growth into. But how long could we keep it up?

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Just another twenty minutes, as it turned out, even with the help of another dozen heavies from the Guardian teams. The new spur of forest made it more than halfway across the airfield, grinding under millions of dollars worth of private and company planes, and then just ran out of steam. Growth slowed, trees shivered, reaching branches turned skyward, and there was nothing to fight—just a dense wild of primeval trees where a commercial airfield had been.

Which was good, because my arms were on fire from wrists to shoulders. I could barely feel my hands, and had to force them to release their grip on Ajax’ maul. Everyone was covered in bits of oak, hickory, and other tree species that should know better than to mess with us, my hair was sticky with maple sap, and the tiny splinters of wood that had worked their way under my mask made my face itch.

“Is—is that it?” I gasped for air.

The greenbelt is quiet,” Shelly confirmed. “The south edge stopped growing when the woods took its turn.”

“Look sharp, everyone.” Lei Zi landed, the shimmer of air made by her electrostatic field barely visible. “They’re evacuating the surrounding neighborhoods, and the DSA is sending an environmental team. We don’t know who started this, and until we know it won’t restart, we’re on station.”

Seven handed me a water bottle, looking disgustingly fresh; he and The Harlequin had stayed with the floater for this one.

“Thanks.” Trying to ignore my suddenly fluttering stomach, I took a long draw, stopped. “Do you hear that?”

“What?”

My super-duper senses would drown me if I couldn’t ignore uninteresting sounds, but I always heard explosions in my range. I looked west as the distant boom turned into a roar, pointed.

Seven squinted. “Is that what I think it is?”

“Yep.” I could see details he couldn’t, and the boy climbing into the sky on top of a brilliant column of explosive flashes was wearing a red varsity jacket.

“Breakthrough?”

“Probably.”

“Does he know what he’s doing?”

I sighed, handed him the bottle. “Probably not. He’s screaming. Tell Lei Zi I’ve got him.”

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Chapter Two

Everybody wants to be a superhero, because nobody knows what a shit-job it really is.

Malcolm Scott, aka Megaton

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“Mal! Dude! Look at this!” Tony nudged me hard for the third time, eyes glued to his epad. “Malcolm Scott!” Mr. Winfield called, going down his list.

Ignoring Tony, I raised my hand. “Here.” Winfield didn’t even raise his eyes to look; he’d stopped looking at anybody years ago, which made it easy to ditch his class—just get a “friend” to answer to your name, he didn’t even have to disguise his voice. Freshmen year I’d been as many as three kids a day in his class, till I got onto the wrestling team and was able to shrug off those kinds of friends.

“Tina Halls! Rachel Kerry!”

Even out here, standing in the middle of the soccer field in our designated “homeroom station” for what had to be the third Emergency Evacuation Drill since school started, Winfield acted like he talked to disembodied voices. At least here the Emergency Class Monitors—Doug Lee and Tiffany Bright this fall, poor guys—were checking the same lists. Doug held one of the class’s two emergency phones, the ones they were supposed to call us on to tell us where to go or if the drill was over, in a death-grip. I wanted to tell him to lighten up.

“Bradley Card!”

I pushed my fists deeper into my pockets. A varsity jacket was good for two things: putting you out of range of the bullies and keeping you warm, and fall was coming early this year. The field hadn’t had time to warm up yet, and I wondered how long they’d keep us out here chilling until they decided the drill was over.

“Tiffany Bright!”

Dude, she’s standing right beside you.

“Mal, will you freaking look at this?” Tony shoved the epad in my face, almost dancing. “Not. A. Drill!” I pulled my hands out and managed to grab the pad before he dropped it. It would have been okay in the grass, but he was enough of a spazz he’d probably have stepped on it.

He had it set to Powernet; not a shock—he wasn’t a supergeek, but only because they were the worst kind of geeks and he wasn’t interested in getting beat on or hazed every other school day. The pad showed a streaming video identified as news helicopter footage.

The Sentinels and every Guardian team in Chicagoland were fighting a bunch of trees.

Holy crap.

The information bar scrolled team stats and facts, going on about how Riptide had obviously leveled up—he’d never shown the ability to use his water jets to cut before.

“Dude, it’s at the municipal airport! No wonder they’ve got us out here!” Tony took the pad back, keeping it tilted so I could see, and we watched mutant trees waste a bunch of connected buildings the bar said was the Chicago Executive Airport terminal—the place rich guys kept their jets. The capes kept working the edges, like they were trying to trim a hedge growing faster than you could cut. They blasted trees, smashed them, sliced them, and the bar kept referring back to Riptide’s new attack style. Trees are eating the airport and that’s their priority?

“That is one bad-ass crip.” Tony said admiringly. He had more than just my attention now, and we became the center of a crowd as half the class tried to look or asked what we were watching; nothing like this ever happened out in the burbs. I smelled lavender, turned, and had to grab Tiffany before she hit the grass.

“Sorry!” she said as if it were her fault. She got herself straight and flashed me a smile when I let go of her arm. “What’s going on?”

I shrugged, not sure what to do with my hands. “It’s not a drill.”

“Oh no!” She dropped her clipboard and spun around, looking up like she expected the capes to airdrop right into the Hersey High soccer field. I bent and scooped the board up from the wet grass, reattached the emergency phone she’d clipped to it, but kept hold of it all as some of the guys laughed. She flushed. Skinny and awkward, Tiff was probably the girl who would bloom into a supermodel after graduating, but guys are dicks and right now it sucked to be her.

“I’ve got to take that to the flagpole,” she explained, ignoring the guys. “Now that everyone’s been counted.”

“So let’s go.” I started off and she hopped to catch up.

“You don’t— Thanks. For back there.”

I shrugged, still walking. “Not a problem.”

“So, you think they’re going to evacuate us?”

Coming around the side of the school, we watched school busses pulling into the half- circle drive that separated the front parking and the flagpole lawn from the main doors.

“I think that’s a strong maybe.” We crossed between two busses already in line, engines idling while they waited to move up and load, joined the crowd of students and adults at the flagpole.

Vice Principle Blevins stood at the center of the group, looking at his own clipboard and calling into his phone. He nodded as a packed bus pulled away, said something else under the sound of the engines. After all the drills, he was probably totally into finally using it. Tiffany pulled herself up straighter, reached for the clipboard.

“Thanks Mal— Wait! The phone!”

Shit. It had come unclipped somewhere. I looked around behind us, spotted it back in the drive. One of the busses we’d passed between had moved up but the other just sat there, and of course the phone lay on the pavement in front of it.

“I’ll get it!” I darted back across the drive.

“No, wait!” Tiffany called, but I crouched and grabbed it. I turned back to her, heard the engine throttle down, and got smacked to the ground by the lurching bus.

Shit. The pain of my head hitting the drive blinded me, but I felt the scrape of the pavement as the bus fender caught my jacket. Blinking my eyes clear as the rolling bus twisted my body into line with it, I saw the right wheel coming at my legs, knew it was going to roll right over me. I panicked, kicked, the wheel caught my shoe, twisted my foot, and my scream went higher than Tiffany’s at the wrenching pain, sharper than any wrestling hold. Hot pressure erupted beneath my skin, flared out as I pushed.

The concussive explosion hammered my ears and I barely heard the shriek of wrenched metal, couldn’t see through the blinding flash. I blinked, blinked again, desperately scrubbed my eyes and tried to hear through the ringing. What

The bus, what was left of it, lay twisted on its side twenty feet back from me—the entire front window buckled and craze-cracked and pushed deep into the cabin with the rest of the front of the bus. Blood painted the webbed glass, dripping onto the drive. Tiffany wouldn’t stop screaming, the crowd around Blevins added its noise, mute in my ringing ears—and my stomach rolled with a way too familiar nauseating panic. I tried to stand but couldn’t make my legs work. Blevins yelled something, pointing, and two of the campus-cops headed for me, pulling the guns we always teased them about—like they’d shoot kids—as I scrambled uselessly backward. Heat and pressure flashed through me and I exploded again, and kept exploding.

Aaaaaaaaaaaah!

I rocketed into the air, acceleration squishing me like a thrill ride. Hersey High dropped away under my feet and my ears popped hard as the buildings shrank and the clouds got more personal.

Aaaaaah stop!

It did. The burning thrust bursting from my bones vanished—and with it the roaring flaring column pushing me up. Now my stomach decided we were falling. Nope, the buried science-nerd in me said. We’re just decelerating, coasting to apogee. We’ll be falling in a few seconds.

Awesome—I’d burned through all my adrenaline and my brain had decided that a minute of non-stop terror was enough, so I was going to die calm and sarcastic. I should have been nicer to Tiff—

“Are you done?”

I flailed about my center of gravity. A tiny blonde sticky mess, lightly swinging a bell-shaped chunk of metal that weighed more than I did, hung in the air beside me.

“Because I can give you a lift.”

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So that’s it for now. I will try and post a little more often, and am always glad to hear from you.

M.G.Harmon

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Omega Nights and New Years.

WtC_Omega_NightBehold the cover.

I’ve got to say that this was really fun. Apprentice writers are encouraged to start with short stories, but I have never been able to condense an idea down to less than 50,000 words. But the concept for Omega Night, now available on Amazon, came as a flashback to a hundred Superman comics. It was fun, and even contains a little scene important to setting up Young Sentinels. I thought of saving it and shoehorning it into the next book, but it really didn’t fit, so here it is. Enjoy.

Speaking of Young Sentinels, it is coming along. I’m taking my time and trying to do justice to the characters and situations; one problem with success is expectations–you do good once, twice, and people expect you to do it again! (Your own expectations get pretty high, too.) Since nobody who liked Wearing the Cape has written in to tell me that Villains Inc. stank on ice (quite the contrary, its Amazon-rating is higher), I don’t want to let everyone down with book three.

On the other hand, I want to expand Hope’s world, even experiment a little. Bite Me was part of this–showing part of the world outside the charmed circle of superhero-celebrities–and in Young Sentinels I’m introducing multiple POVs (point-of-views). At least two, possibly three, so readers won’t be seeing the world only through Hope’s eyes this time. But for sure Young Sentinels will continue to advance the overarching themes and storylines advanced in the first two books and continue Hope’s growth as a superhero.

2013 Goals/Projects.

I really want to do at least two books this year: Young Sentinels plus, maybe, Worst Contact. Two to three books a year is pretty good for most professional writers, and if I can maintain that output it’s a full-time career for me. 2012 was a good year for my current titles, leading me to tentatively conclude that, yes, there is a future for me in indie-publishing.

Beyond the two book-projects, I have two other irons in the fire. First, I am in early talks with an artist for a series of ink drawings for Wearing the Cape. If talks are fruitful, I want to publish a hardback deluxe edition with ten to twelve really cool illustrations of favorite characters and scenes. I’m not changing the cover, though–Victoria’s excellent cover-art cannot be surpassed.

The second project is kind of a return to my roots. Back in high school I was an avid fantasy roleplaying gamer (Dungeons and Dragons, etc) who segued into superhero roleplaying back when the only major game-engine was Champions. Being a rebel, I went with GURPS Supers. So now, as the post-Event world gets more and more detailed, I would like to put together a Role-Playing Game sourcebook for fans into superhero roleplaying. I considered the current incarnation of GURPS Supers, but Steve Jackson Games keeps a tight lock on its game-engine, so I’m looking at Green Ronin’s Mutants and Masterminds. This may take longer than a year since it’s secondary to my writing, and may require outside expertise, but I really like the idea of Wearing the Cape: The Roleplaying Game.

Thank You.

So thank you, everyone who has come along for the ride so far. I writer doesn’t write in a vacuum, and the feedback I have gotten from many of you has gotten me this far. I see many more Wearing the Cape stories in the future, and hope that my other scribblings will be as well received. Happy New Year, and may your 2013 be as exciting as mine looks to be!

M.G.Harmon

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The Velveteen Hero

VelveteenWhere are they now?

There’s another word for teen sidekicks. It’s child-soldiers. I stumbled across this gem on TV Tropes, followed the link to Amazon, and… well, go there to read my review.

I’ll say this here; Seanan McGuire gets it. Too many writers approach superhero stories from the deconstructive angle, but what they don’t understand is that, on the whole, the only unrealistic thing about them is the superpowers. Given superpowers in the real world, would we have superheroes? Most emphatically, yes–we have heroes already, people who put themselves in harms way for other as part of their jobs. And, given the immensely popular superhero stereotypes that exist in fiction, they’d probably use codenames and wear costumes; they just wouldn’t act the way they mostly do in the comics (the government wouldn’t allow it). Seanan understands that, for the reader to care what happens to the hero, the hero must be believable and her world must be believable given the Rules the writer has decided upon. Velveteen vs. the Junior Super Patriots is a great adventure yarn, a touching human story, and an at times Laugh Out Loud read; my sole complaint is that it ends on a cliff-hanger, which means that I have to wait patiently to see how it all plays out. A mixed misfortune. Go buy the book, enjoy it, then write a great Amazon review–I want Seanan to get all the encouragement she needs to write more more more.

Other Notes

Work continues on Young Sentinels, but slowly; still hoping for a first-quarter publication date. In the meantime, I am also polishing my first Astra short story, Omega Night, and will be releasing it on Amazon when finished for $.99. The story began as a part of Young Sentinels, but didn’t fit and was too good to throw away.

Merry Christmas, everyone!

M.G.Harmon

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Wearing the Cape: The Beginning, Available Free!

As part of my ongoing campaign to get the Wearing the Cape series out to a wider audience, I have also made WtC:TB available on the Nook at Barnes and Noble and on Smashwords. It can be downloaded from Smashwords in just about any electronic format imaginable, for FREE, to read on the Kindle, Nook, or whatever e-reader you prefer.

I would do the same for the Amazon and Barnes and Noble editions if I could, but they won’t let me charge less than $.99. The best news is that the Smashwords versions are not copy-protected–I want people to copy it and post it to all their friends. For anyone who wants to help me make WtC:TB more visible on these sites, I encourage you to post a review and rating on Amazon, Barnes and Noble, and Smashwords (you can always duplicate your Wearing the Cape review if you have previously done one).

And everyone have a great Thanksgiving!

-M.G.Harmon

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Stuff I Think You Should Know.

Hey everyone, and hope you all had a great Halloween. I tried to do my bit by getting Bite Me up in October, and it’s selling well although it has yet to be reviewed by anyone into vampire stories. Been busy since on three projects; one, of course, is Young Sentinels, which I hope to release in January. For those who like teasers, the opening sentence is:

We were lucky I was flying morning patrol instead of sitting in class when Potowatomi Woods decided to destroy the Chicago Executive Airport.

First rule of writing superhero tales: always start with a bang.

The second project was a complete re-edit of both Wearing the Cape and Villains Inc. Lacking both agent and editor, I missed things in both books–mostly grammatical and spelling errors, but also some very embarrassing mistakes; for example, I gave Detective Fisher three first names (for the record, it’s Max). So I spent much of October going back over both books and “fixing” things and then uploading the changes on Amazon. The good news is, everyone who purchased the Kindle edition of either can get the updated releases by deleting their current copies from their Kindles, sending an email to customer service asking for the updated copy for their archives, and then downloading the new copy from their archives once the change is made (it usually takes no more than a day).

The third project was a simple one: I cut out the first third of Wearing the Cape (everything up till the end of Astra’s first big fight and her argument with Atlas), and put it up for sale for $.99 on Amazon as Wearing the Cape: The Beginning. Why? Because while I want to keep my books priced as professional-publisher prices, I also want to put Astra out there in the world of impulse-buy $.99 downloads.

Naturally WtC:TB is starting with zero reviews, so anyone who has previously reviewed Wearing the Cape and wants to copy non-spoilery parts of their review to WtC:TB will have my endless gratitude. And if you have any Kindle-using friends who you think would appreciate the story, gifting a $.99 book is an easy way to spread the love.

And on a last note; the October drawing for two copies of Bite Me: Big Easy Nights is finished. Since Richard Smith is the only one who posted a review and replied to the drawing announcement post to let me know (and still didn’t provide an email), he is the lucky winner. Since I set aside a two copies for this, if anyone else has posted a review or wants to post a review, the extra copy will go to whomever first alerts me to their review here.

Send me your email address Richard. And everyone enjoy the season!

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